Works of Charles and Mary Lamb. VI-VII. Letters
Charles Lamb to Bernard Barton, 7 July 1824
DEAR B. B.—I
have been suffering under a severe inflammation of the eyes, notwithstanding
which I resolutely went through your very pretty volume at once, which I dare
pronounce in no ways inferior to former lucubrations. “Abroad” and “lord” are vile
rhymes notwithstanding, and if you count you will
wonder how many times you have repeated
the word unearthly—thrice in one poem. It is become a
slang word with the bards; avoid it in future lustily. “Time” is
fine; but there are better a good deal, I think. The volume does not lie by me;
and, after a long day’s smarting fatigue, which has almost put out my
eyes (not blind however to your merits), I dare not trust myself with long
writing. The verses to
Bloomfield are the sweetest in the collection. Religion is sometimes
lugged in, as if it did not come naturally. I will go over carefully when I get
my seeing, and exemplify. You have also too much of singing metre, such as
requires no deep ear to make; lilting measure, in which you have done Woolman injustice. Strike at less superficial
melodies. The piece on Nayler is more to
my fancy.
My eye runs waters. But I will give you a fuller account
some day. The book is a very pretty one in more than one sense. The decorative
harp, perhaps, too ostentatious; a simple pipe preferable.
Farewell, and many thanks.
C. Lamb.
Bernard Barton (1784-1849)
Prolific Quaker poet whose verse appeared in many of the literary annuals; he was an
acquaintance of Charles Lamb.
James Naylor (1618-1660)
Early Quaker evangelist who gave offence to both George Fox and religious authorities; he
was convicted of blasphemy and spent his later years in prison.
John Woolman (1720-1772)
American Quaker essayist and opponent of slavery; his
Journal was
published in 1774.