The Life and Correspondence of Robert Southey
Robert Southey to Mr. Ebenezer Elliott, 3 February 1809
“Keswick, Feb. 3. 1809.
“Sir,
“Yesterday I received your note enclosing the specimen
of your poems. I have perused that specimen, but my advice cannot be comprised
in a few words.
“A literary, as well as a medical opinion, Mr. Elliott, must needs be blindly given,
unless the age and circumstances of the person who requires it are known. When
I advised Henry White to publish a
second volume of poems, it was because he had fixed his heart upon a University
education, and this seemed to be a feasible method of raising funds for that
end; his particular circumstances rendering that prudent which would otherwise
have been very much the reverse. For poetry is not a marketable article unless
there be something strange or
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peculiar to give it a
fashion; and in his case what money might possibly have been raised, would, in
almost every instance, have been considered rather as given to the author than
paid for his book. Your poem would not find purchasers except in the circle of
your own friends; out of that circle not twenty copies would be sold. I believe
not half that number.
“You are probably a young man, Sir, and it is plain
from this specimen that you possess more than one of those powers which form
the poet, and those in a far more than ordinary degree. Whether your plans of
life are such as to promise leisure for that attention (almost it might be said
that devotement), without which no man can ever become a great poet, you
yourself must know. If they should, you will in a very few years have outgrown
this poem, and would then be sorry to see it in print, irrecoverably given to
the public, because you would feel it to be an inadequate proof of your own
talents. If, on the other hand, you consider poetry as merely an amusement or
an ornament of youth, to be laid aside in riper years for the ordinary pursuits
of the world, with still less indulgence will you then regard the printed
volume, for you will reckon it among the follies of which you are ashamed. In
either case it is best not to publish.
“It is far, very far from my wish to discourage or
depress you. There is great promise in this specimen; it has all the faults
which I should wish to see in the writings of a young poet, as the surest
indications that he has that in him which will enable him
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to become a good one. But no young man can possibly write a good narrative
poem; though I believe he cannot by any other means so effectually improve
himself as by making the attempt. I myself published one at the age of twenty-one: it made a
reputation for me,—not so much by its merits, as because it was taken up
by one party, and abused by another, almost independently of its merits or
demerits, at a time when party-spirit was more violent than it is to be hoped
it will ever be again. What has been the consequences of this publication? That
the poem from beginning to end was full of incorrect language and errors of
every kind; that all the weeding of years could never weed it clean; and that
many people at this day rate me, not according to the standard of my present
intellect, but by what it was fourteen years ago. Your subject, also, has the
same disadvantage with mine, that it is anti-national: and believe me, this is
a grievous one; for though we have both been right in our feelings, yet to feel
against our own country can only be right upon great and transitory occasions,
and none but our contemporaries can feel with us,—none but those who
remember the struggle and took part in it. And you are more unfortunate than I
was, for America is acting at this time unnaturally against England; and every
reader will feel this; and his sense of what the Americans are now, will make
him fancy that you paint falsely in describing them as they were then. There is
yet another reason—criticism is conducted upon a different plan from what
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Dragon of Wantley’s den; but you will provoke enemies as venemous if you
publish; and Heaven knows whether or no you are gifted with armour of proof
against them. Nor is it the effect that malicious censure and ridicule might
produce upon your own feelings which is of so much importance, as what would be
produced upon your friends. They who are so only in name will derive a
provoking pleasure from seeing you laughed at and abused; they who love you
will feel more pain than you yourself, because you will and must have a higher
confidence in yourself, and a stronger conviction of injustice than they can be
supposed to possess.
“The sum of my advice is—do not publish this
poem; but if you can without grievous imprudence afford to write poetry,
continue so to do, because, hereafter, you will write it well. As yet you have
only green fruit to offer; wait a season, and there will be a fair and full
gathering when it is ripe.
Henry Kirke White (1785-1806)
Originally a stocking-weaver; trained for the law at Cambridge where he was a
contemporary of Byron; after his early death his poetical
Remains
were edited by Robert Southey (2 vols, 1807) with a biography that made the poet
famous.